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Not a big fan of the soft rap; the vox of extremely loud in the mix. Maybe dropping the levels on that track, and throwing some 'verb on it will make it better. Also, vocal doubling works wonders in rap. This track has potential, but there are a lot of tech errors in it.
- StereoCilia
P.S. Check out my tunes if you get the time: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1850783